The Little Mermaid
Doug entered his dorm room and picked up the phone to check his messages. The in-box is full. What happened while he was at the library?
Every message is the same. Two minutes of miscellaneous forwarding comments and then the funniest fifteen seconds he’s ever heard.
Wiping away the tears Doug continues the chain.
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You jump from past to present tense throughout your story which is a no-no.
Whoops! I knew something didn’t feel right…