Chaos

This submission comes from Paul Liadis, who earns a double-helping of thanks for getting through a technical issue to submit his story. Thanks, Paul! Thanks, Paul!

My comrades had fallen hours ago, overwhelmed by the events of the day, their seeming limitless energy depleted. To my left, my sister lay motionless on a mound of rubble, empty hands outstretched. Debris hung from the ceiling and the walls. My ears throbbed, still ringing from the awful, glorious noise.

Man, I love sleepovers.

One Response to “Chaos”

  1. December 2nd, 2006 | 11:09 am

    [...] Check out my 55 Word story, Chaos,  over at 55 Fiction! [...]


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