http://www.55fiction.com/2007/06/snake-charmer/ Fragments of fiction in 55 words Tue, 20 Nov 2007 18:33:02 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 http://www.55fiction.com/2007/06/snake-charmer/comment-page-1/#comment-207 Dean Christianson Wed, 31 Oct 2007 22:12:46 +0000 http://www.55fiction.com/snake-charmer/#comment-207 P.S. I would give it a different title... something more appropos to the chaos going on in the character's mind, or, perhaps to the metaphor itself P.S. I would give it a different title… something more appropos to the chaos going on in the character’s mind, or, perhaps to the metaphor itself

]]> http://www.55fiction.com/2007/06/snake-charmer/comment-page-1/#comment-206 Dean Christianson Wed, 31 Oct 2007 22:03:55 +0000 http://www.55fiction.com/snake-charmer/#comment-206 Mary Ellen, this is a wonderful story, worthy of being published in one of the 55 word anthologies. The character's state of mind is beautifully presented with the literary metaphor of the Hatter's tea party which, itself, is perfectly interupted by the Red Queen's apt phrase. It is worthy of at least three thumbs up. Mary Ellen, this is a wonderful story, worthy of being published in one of the 55 word anthologies. The character’s state of mind is beautifully presented with the literary metaphor of the Hatter’s tea party which, itself, is perfectly interupted by the Red Queen’s apt phrase. It is worthy of at least three thumbs up.

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