Flight
This story has been submitted by Jonic Linley, one of b5 bloggers. He is currently writing for Re:Retro and his personal blog is 100yen. Thanks Jonic for the submission
Then time stopped…
And we span along a majestic arc through the air.
Surrounded by my friends I contemplated my life as we shone in the sky…
I could see the water shimmering in the moonlight below us, the street lights of a distant city.
And we flew.
Our crippled vehicle slammed into the water…
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POSTED IN: Drama, Guest entries
2 opinions for Flight
Jesse
Apr 14, 2006 at 6:47 pm
lol, talk about depressing. That’s excellent. The more depressing the better. Happy endings are so cliche
Jonic
Apr 15, 2006 at 4:37 am
Thanks Jesse! I’m not sure if it’s depressing or not (I actually think it sounds like quite a nice way to spend your final seconds), but rest assured I hate clichéd endings too!
Any more entries I submit will be of a similar theme I think… I had fun writing this one, so there will definitely be more on the way…
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