I could barely keep my teeth from chattering. The bonfire burning across the courtyard did nothing to keep me warm. My eyelids drooped under the weight of the third watch.
Suddenly, a man was standing in front of me, rifle drawn. I fumbled for the hammer, praying he hadn’t yet seen me.
I was wrong.
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6 opinions for Into the Mist
Alan
May 22, 2006 at 11:31 pm
Bang bang
I shot you down, bang bang
You hit the ground , bang bang
That awful sound, bang bang
I used to shoot you down
Cory Aldrich
May 23, 2006 at 5:15 am
You’re story was crying out to me for the second viewpoint.
Sasha
May 23, 2006 at 9:47 am
OMG. I was right to think that the two stories were connected! Hahaha. That’s an idea we can all consider here. ;)
Cory Aldrich
May 23, 2006 at 9:55 am
You never know where an idea will come from…
Alan
May 23, 2006 at 12:31 pm
Still some life in this one Cory…
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