Doug entered his dorm room and picked up the phone to check his messages. The in-box is full. What happened while he was at the library?
Every message is the same. Two minutes of miscellaneous forwarding comments and then the funniest fifteen seconds he’s ever heard.
Wiping away the tears Doug continues the chain.
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2 opinions for The Little Mermaid
Marsha
Oct 31, 2006 at 2:53 pm
You jump from past to present tense throughout your story which is a no-no.
Cory Aldrich
Nov 6, 2006 at 7:44 am
Whoops! I knew something didn’t feel right… :)
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